how do we best show internal thoughts? Italics, by a he thought? or is there other ways?
so eg.
Please, he thought, not knowing where he was sending the thoughts to; he’d never been religious. Please, if there's anything there, amongst the stars, look after him.
or, Please, he thought, not knowing where he was sending the thoughts to; he’d never been religious. Please, if there's anything there, amongst the stars, look after him.
so eg.
Please, he thought, not knowing where he was sending the thoughts to; he’d never been religious. Please, if there's anything there, amongst the stars, look after him.
or, Please, he thought, not knowing where he was sending the thoughts to; he’d never been religious. Please, if there's anything there, amongst the stars, look after him.