starrypawz
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Okay, some of you may recognise me some of you won't. If you do recognise me you will probably remember the fantasy story I was working on before I disappeared. Bascially I found I wasn't getting anywhere and ended up scrapping it but I really liked the setting and some of the characters I'd created in said setting and decided to try my hand at writing something again. It did pain me somewhat as it was a story that began when I was 11 in a form totally different from how it ended up and I had great plans for it but to be fair over the last few years I felt I'd 'outgrown' it, oh well.
This is the first 'recreational' piece I've done for a good while since most of my writing has been college work and some random drabbles. This is the 'introduction' as it were to the story, I've got more but I feel I've hit a bit of a block. Anyway enough rambling.
Listara, a city cited to be a mixture of Elven grace and human sturdiness, a city filled with the best artisans but also the best weaponsmiths, a city cited to be full of opportunities.
It certainly was full of opportunities, at least ones that required light fingers and being able to slip into the shadows unnoticed. One of those opportunities was presenting itself right now, a traveller it seemed. Weighed down with a good deal of baggage and the most important thing… a good sized coinpurse or two, knowing the travellers that came through Listara he’d most likely be too taken up with the city to notice if a coinpurse went missing.
Little did the traveller know he’d been watched, from the moment he came in through the trader’s gate, hiding in the shadows and watching from rooftops he was being scoped out by the many cutpurses, pickpockets and thugs who were crouched like cats waiting for a sparrow.
Echo was among these, she’d been scoping out the trader’s gate since dawn waiting for a decent target. Fighting off the demons of boredom and a leg that was threatening to go numb she’d spotted him, and was over the rooftops tracking him down, slipping in and out of shadows and making sure not to loose him in the crowds of people.
It had been several hours since she’d started and she was still relentless in her pursuit of the traveller. After following him and nearly loosing him in a crowd she finally saw him disappear down an alley. She vaulted across the rooftops, nearly loosing her footing when she landed on the other side. She crept along the roofs of the alleyway and silently dropped down into the shadows. She carefully took a small knife from her belt and followed behind the traveller for a few paces, and in a heartbeat she’d cut free a coinpurse and was back onto the rooftops before the traveller had chance to notice. She opened the coinpurse and tipped out five gold coins into her hand, not too shabby… then something else fell into her hand, it was a heavy feeling bronze coloured…coin? No not a coin, it had a hole drilled through the middle like it was a trinket of some sort; it was pretty unremarkable to look at. Eh, I can probably fence it for a few coins… Echo quickly put the coins and the trinket into the pouch again. Sure, it was frowned upon to attack a thief for their ill gotten gains, but ‘accidents’ happen…
This is the first 'recreational' piece I've done for a good while since most of my writing has been college work and some random drabbles. This is the 'introduction' as it were to the story, I've got more but I feel I've hit a bit of a block. Anyway enough rambling.
Listara, a city cited to be a mixture of Elven grace and human sturdiness, a city filled with the best artisans but also the best weaponsmiths, a city cited to be full of opportunities.
It certainly was full of opportunities, at least ones that required light fingers and being able to slip into the shadows unnoticed. One of those opportunities was presenting itself right now, a traveller it seemed. Weighed down with a good deal of baggage and the most important thing… a good sized coinpurse or two, knowing the travellers that came through Listara he’d most likely be too taken up with the city to notice if a coinpurse went missing.
Little did the traveller know he’d been watched, from the moment he came in through the trader’s gate, hiding in the shadows and watching from rooftops he was being scoped out by the many cutpurses, pickpockets and thugs who were crouched like cats waiting for a sparrow.
Echo was among these, she’d been scoping out the trader’s gate since dawn waiting for a decent target. Fighting off the demons of boredom and a leg that was threatening to go numb she’d spotted him, and was over the rooftops tracking him down, slipping in and out of shadows and making sure not to loose him in the crowds of people.
It had been several hours since she’d started and she was still relentless in her pursuit of the traveller. After following him and nearly loosing him in a crowd she finally saw him disappear down an alley. She vaulted across the rooftops, nearly loosing her footing when she landed on the other side. She crept along the roofs of the alleyway and silently dropped down into the shadows. She carefully took a small knife from her belt and followed behind the traveller for a few paces, and in a heartbeat she’d cut free a coinpurse and was back onto the rooftops before the traveller had chance to notice. She opened the coinpurse and tipped out five gold coins into her hand, not too shabby… then something else fell into her hand, it was a heavy feeling bronze coloured…coin? No not a coin, it had a hole drilled through the middle like it was a trinket of some sort; it was pretty unremarkable to look at. Eh, I can probably fence it for a few coins… Echo quickly put the coins and the trinket into the pouch again. Sure, it was frowned upon to attack a thief for their ill gotten gains, but ‘accidents’ happen…