Hey guys I had some spare time last night so I put this together, hope you like it. I know some names might be a pit corny but I didn't have much time Critique all you want, it'll help out
The smell of death filled the air. Another scout of the Jerane Kingdom died before his companion’s blade. Their lair was the only place that the Jerane Kingdom did not control in the southern land.
“How did he find us Naemus?” asked Babarus, a rather tall man revealed himself out of the darkness. His clothes were identical to Babarus’; he wore a thick black cloak and a hood which darkened out his face. He pulled down his hood to reveal a man that did not look a day over 25. He had brown hair and hazel eyes which could draw a man into if he looked long enough.
“That does not concern us Babarus; the Dark Legion remains safe and so shall it. We may have to cover our surroundings though, the light we need to use can reveal our position to travellers miles away” replied Naemus, he gazed upon Babarus seeing how he would reply.
“Very well, I shall inform Zeresis of this, be gone and guard well” ordered Babarus, they saluted each other and parted to attend to their duties.
The Dark Legion is a group of warlocks and assassins that used to live in peace but when the church took a place in the politics of the world they were banished from the land and hunted down like a pack of dogs accused of hierarchy. Only 17 of them remained, and their means of survival relied in the fall of the church and their king. But with only 17 they stood no chance, their only hope was surviving and making sure none of their scouts located their home.
“Zeresis, another scout has tracked us down, this is the fifth this month, what should we do!?” demanded Babarus, he was filled with anger. He could not bare another of his brothers to fall.
“We will remain here, we are close to farms to feed off and we have a stream in this cavern to supply us with water, this is our home! Just because a few scouts come does not mean we have to move, we were here before them, this is our land!” yelled Zeresis, he looked even angrier than Babarus.
Cheers,
Alex
The smell of death filled the air. Another scout of the Jerane Kingdom died before his companion’s blade. Their lair was the only place that the Jerane Kingdom did not control in the southern land.
“How did he find us Naemus?” asked Babarus, a rather tall man revealed himself out of the darkness. His clothes were identical to Babarus’; he wore a thick black cloak and a hood which darkened out his face. He pulled down his hood to reveal a man that did not look a day over 25. He had brown hair and hazel eyes which could draw a man into if he looked long enough.
“That does not concern us Babarus; the Dark Legion remains safe and so shall it. We may have to cover our surroundings though, the light we need to use can reveal our position to travellers miles away” replied Naemus, he gazed upon Babarus seeing how he would reply.
“Very well, I shall inform Zeresis of this, be gone and guard well” ordered Babarus, they saluted each other and parted to attend to their duties.
The Dark Legion is a group of warlocks and assassins that used to live in peace but when the church took a place in the politics of the world they were banished from the land and hunted down like a pack of dogs accused of hierarchy. Only 17 of them remained, and their means of survival relied in the fall of the church and their king. But with only 17 they stood no chance, their only hope was surviving and making sure none of their scouts located their home.
“Zeresis, another scout has tracked us down, this is the fifth this month, what should we do!?” demanded Babarus, he was filled with anger. He could not bare another of his brothers to fall.
“We will remain here, we are close to farms to feed off and we have a stream in this cavern to supply us with water, this is our home! Just because a few scouts come does not mean we have to move, we were here before them, this is our land!” yelled Zeresis, he looked even angrier than Babarus.
Cheers,
Alex