Below is a description of a monster that I've just written about in my book. Do you think it is scary, well described etc? Then, you face the wrath of the Lizarii.’ The creature dropped its cloak, revealing it’s scaly body. It stood to its full height, slightly taller than a grown man. It blue-green skin and yellow abdomen reflected the sunlight, but people didn’t tend to notice this. They looked at either its long claws or its head, which was elongated and the long mouth had dozens of sharp teeth protruding from it. What do you think, any comments welcome.