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    WOTF: Need Feedback on Short Story.

    Five days. No takers. I guess I need to spice it up a little. Here's the first 13/14 lines: Thomas sat by the magic wishing well. He figured the beautiful spot and the well must be magic--how else could it make him feel so good. After two days of walking on dusty roads, this was a the first...
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    WOTF: Need Feedback on Short Story.

    Another quarter of WOTF is upon me. Again, I need feedback. ------ Quote: I'm about to submit my latest short story to the Writers of the Future Contest (it has to be in by Sept 30th). Because of the nature of the contest, I don't want to just post the entire story here as I'm not sure what...
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    Thanks for reading it Timelord, and thanks for the very useful feedback.
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    I got your e-mails. I just sent it out to both of you.
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    timelord4. I looked at your Sonora thread, but couldn't see your e-mail address; and it's blocked via your profile. Click on my name "Taft" and send me an e-mail so I know where to send it. MissGuildedFee Same thing. Send me an e-mail address. What format do you want it in? Thanks for...
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    Anyone else willing to read it? Times runnin' out. I've gotten some great feedback so far, but I need one or more people to critique in the next three or four days.
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    It's the mother of all fantasy/sci-fi contests in the U.S. Writers & Illustrators of the Future Send me an e-mail via this site and I'll send you the story--just tell me what format you want it in. Any feedback before the June 30th would be fine.
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    It's the mother of all fantasy/sci-fi contests here in the U.S. Writers & Illustrators of the Future Send me an e-mail via this site (tell me where to send it) and I'll send the story to you. As mentioned above, let me know what format you want it in.
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    It's the mother of all fantasy/sci-fi contest here in the U.S. Writers & Illustrators of the Future Click on "Taft" and "send e-mail to Taft" and I'll send you a copy of the story. As mentioned above, also let me know what format you want it in.
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    It's the mother of all fantasy/sci-fi short story contests here in the U.S. Writers & Illustrators of the Future Click on "Taft" and "send an e-mail to Taft" and send me your e-mail address and I'll send to story to you. And (as mentioned above), let me know what format you want it in.
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    Sci-fi concept. Does it interest you?

    I like the idea, however, I wouldn't use Mars. There are just too many real world reason why Mars wouldn't be "a habitable planet much like Earth." Based on the premise you've written above, using a different planet, further away and as-of-yet not discovered (in reality) shouldn't be a big...
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    Writers of the Future: I Need Feedback on My Short Story

    I'm about to submit my latest short story to the Writers of the Future Contest (it has to be in by June 30th). Because of the nature of the contest, I don't want to post the story here as I'm not sure what constitutes exposure the contest officials would be unhappy with if the story does well...
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    A 1st chapter, just wondering how it reads.

    It's interesting. It tells enough, without giving too much away just yet. One thing to be careful of. Lots of people who write in first person become overindulgent in the character's thoughts. This tends to slow the story way down and kills the pacing. Make sure you avoid doing that as you...
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    Help. Need Some Bad Guy Names.

    I have good reasons for needing a "bad guy" name. But, of course, I don't need anything as obvious as "Darth Maul". Something in Latin would be good.
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    Help. Need Some Bad Guy Names.

    I need to name the evil character in a short-story I'm writing. Any and all "bad guy" name suggestions are appreciated. Thanks.
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    Unique Sci-Fi. What Would You Like to See?

    I like it!
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    Unique Sci-Fi. What Would You Like to See?

    I'm working on coming up with ideas for a novel. Like most writers, I want my next book to be unique. So many people write the same-old things (examples: *"First Contact" novels...I don't care if I never read another one again. *Matrix-like cyberpunk books. How many more of these can we stand?)...
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