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Excellent,thankyou. How would you show action though, as in, my character is 'legging it' would you not need to say they are legging it? lol Josh x

I would just like it if someone would give me some information on the best way to write about a mute character. They are the main character and the story is from their POV. But i dont want to tell it in third? person because constantly saying 'i thought' would annoy me as a writer as it is not...

I introduced magic into my novel about 50 words in lol. Thats because it fit to what my story needed. So as people have already said, I suggest you just type your story, then have someone read it, if the reeader feels that you should have had the magic introduced earlier, then obviously rewrite...

True lol. I've decided to chill out for the evening instead of writing, its so unlike me and breaks the cycle I have followed for the past 6 months lol. However, Jurassic Park is on the television and it calls to me haha. Thanks for all the advice, it was very very helpful. Josh x

Well, I think my main problem at the moment is the fact that I have alot of back story. I dont really want to make a fourth book, It would seem like I am trying to copy LOTR almost. I suppose it would be much easier that way, but I just dont feel 'RIGHT' about doing it. However, if I just...

Just under 2000 A5 pages. Josh x

I really think I worded my question wrong lol. I think what I was after was common elements of a trilogy. You see, I have written my novel, yet it is too long to be 2 books so I have to split it into three books. But, I wanted to know if there was any sort of guide to splitting it. I think you...

Right, I need some form of help. I thought there was some form of layout or rules for a trilogy? I dont mean rules in the sense that it MUST be done that way, however I mean more along the lines of guidelines to writing a trilogy. HELP! Josh x

I always envisaged my ending first for some reason, but because I came up with some many characters in the ending I had to write them into the story as main characters, so I just ended up making the entire novel into a four part series. I'm really excited though at the minute because I am...

Could you post the playlist by any chance... I am looking for some new musical scores,and I havent found anything fitting, I think I have exhausted my titanic and star wars cd's. Josh x

Well i did what I usually do when I am naming my characters... go onto a translator and then type in the word you think best describes their character. Then from the word it translates them into you can come up with a whole list of good names. For example... Evil in dutch = kwaad Evil in...

The reason she falls to her death is because ... like jesus, sacrificing himself for our sins.. she is doing something relative to the story... however, the conflict is that the male lead is the one that needs to sacrifice himself in this way. Either way the female lead will fall to her 'death'...

Well my book is named after the male lead. However most of the story involves his interaction with the female lead. I see where you are coming from. But i dont want to rewrite one of these female characters where they are helpless and then suddenly get all the power in the world, its just cliche...

Well the reason that the female lead is jumping is because she believes she has to be sacrificed to save everyone, yet her sacrifice is in vain. I have posted about this before indeed. But i dont want to post anything about the story because I have had some issues with plagiarism. << thanks for...

Ending One: The world my characters are in is being destroyed by something and my lead female character is running with the lead male character and something makes the floor crack beneath them and as they slide he grabs something and has her in his other hand and she makes him let her go and she...

okay, i have basiclly re written the story.... sort of.... give me some feedback people please... ‘Red’- A name given to the girl feared by all the inhabitants of Gloomy Wood, woke early one December morning. Known as Red for her love of a scarlet riding-hood that she wore and the colour of...

What do you mean by this my friend? Do you have any other suggestions for an ending? Thanks for all the above, reading through it now its much more snappy, and flows better. Any other endings that could surprise you feel free to help me out. Josh x Below is the edited version of the story...

Okay, for my graphic design A2 Coursework I have to illustrate a fairy tale, either made up or an adaptation of one. So I chose to illustrate Red Riding Hood. BUT... i made a few alterations and made my story part of a book called Twisted Tales For Twisted Minds. Please tell me what you think...

Yeah, I see where you are coming from, I just thought the general overview of the ending would enable people to rate the ending, but as you say I know my characters better. When the actual thing is written I will post it up. Josh

Well, in all honesty, the girl is actually in hell,and the male character believes she is dead. However, my third book focuses on him seeking revenge, and its the reader that discovers that she is alive, and he actually never does discover that she is alive, because they never meet again. I...