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  1. Damiynn

    The Preacher's Knife

    Please just look over. Seeing lawmen crouched in front of a friend’s house at night with their guns drawn, makes you wonder what the hell is going on. Pushing back my long coat, I uncovered the worn leather of my cross-draw rig, slung cavalry style, on my left hip. My SW model 3’s wooden grip...
  2. Damiynn

    Dragon's Eye

    Thanks, sometimes a few extra eyes is what everyone needs.
  3. Damiynn

    Dragon's Eye

    Chapter 1 ‘In service to all.’ I pushed the half-empty bottle of bourbon across the table and away from me and looked at it through blurry red eyes. Leaning back in my chair, I shifted my stare, apprehensively towards the redstone medallion lying next to the bottle. I had seen them...
  4. Damiynn

    The Preacher's Knife

    thanks, this is something I will definitely look into
  5. Damiynn

    The Preacher's Knife

    Chapter 1 I didn't really need my gun but I still pushed back the edge of my long knitted coat revealing the cross draw rig slung cavalry style on my left hip. My pistol's worn wooden grip glinted under the light of the street lamp. I hoped I wouldn’t need it, I knew the man who lived in the...
  6. Damiynn

    Preacher's Knife (redone some)

    Thanks for the ideas. I am going to take another look at it and use some of this to tighten it up
  7. Damiynn

    Preacher's Knife (redone some)

    Chapter 1 I didn't really need the gun, but caution caused me to push back the left side of my knitted coat revealing the cross draw rig slung low, cavalry style on my hip. The curved butt end of the pistol glinted, reflecting back the light of the street lamps. I considered briefly...
  8. Damiynn

    700 words - fight scene.

    First off I have not read any of the previous posts yet so if I touch on the same, sorry. Caleb’s grin widened. As with most things, a little planning saved a lot of leg work. When his toughs had run into the crowd, he’d gone the other way. There was after all, only one way out of the Slave...
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    The Preacher's Knife, review please Chpt 1

    Chapter 1 Pushing back the left side of my knitted coat, I revealed the cross draw rig slung low cavalry style on my hip. The reversed holster and curved butt end of the pistol glinted, reflecting the overhead street lamps. Also glinting sharply in the light was my marshal’s badge...
  10. Damiynn

    From Interview - Page 40 - 487 words

    I deliberately did not read the other posts, if I hit on the same thing, Im sorry. I am also going to make an assumption that this is first person since it is her perspective so.... here we go! It was my duty. Nobody else(S). I had to get out from this mess,(.) (and remove) I couldn’t...
  11. Damiynn

    A King's Court Vol 3

    Thanks everyone. Working on the changes pointed ouy. I might not change all of them but it never hurts to have a different set of eyes on something and since a third book I don't need to be screwing it up now
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    A King's Court Vol 3

    Prologue The smell of blood and sweat clung to everything in the lower levels of the slave pits. Lord Richard couldn’t keep it from permeating his nostrils as he waded through the stench. It was everywhere, he didn’t mind, it was a small price to pay if he was right. He wasn’t sure...
  13. Damiynn

    Chrons Author A.V. Wedhorn

    Chronicles Author A.V.Wedhorn releases second book in his fantasy series, The Kingdom Chronicles. Vol 2 A King's Task takes over right after the stunning and sudden ending to A King's Quest. A King's Task took a while for this 82nd Airborne Paratrooper to complete due to war deployments but it...
  14. Damiynn

    Prologue

    got it, too many dragon references
  15. Damiynn

    Prologue

    This is just a short piece of side work I just need a set of eyes on, thanks Prologue: The deep hollow mourning bells tolled over the city as the honor guard carried the shrouded form through the palace doors. The Dragonmaster, Van Edom, lay atop the bier for all to see as they walked across...
  16. Damiynn

    Veterans Day Support

    82nd Airborne Paratrooper, AV Wedhorn is trying his hardest to get his book that he wrote while being a member of these chrons noticed. Between doing his duty for his country and deploying to several countries during times of war he has found this hard. A King's Quest is a fantastic fantasy...
  17. Damiynn

    The Dubhglas(Short opening to chapter 453 words)

    With red, raw eyes, Eoppa stared at the mild waters of the Dubhglas river. Those waters, scene of their recent victory and staging point into the invasion of the Briton lands around Sorvidunum now seemed to mock him with their placid flow. Silently he cursed Alle and his grandiose plans. Yes...
  18. Damiynn

    A King's Quest Vol 1 of the Kingdom Chronicles

    I tried to get it out for free but... its .99cents Its hard to get noticed as a soldier slash writer. You put in 15 hour work days while not deployed and try to spend time with the family, and then you try to pursue a career you love in writing and you have little time. A King's Quest is a...
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    Chronicles Author releases A King's Quest, Free Fantasy Ebook for Nook and Kindle

    Sorry there was a mistake by the publisher, A King's Quest is going to be .99 cents to any who want it for nook
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    Chronicles Author releases A King's Quest, Free Fantasy Ebook for Nook and Kindle

    To those of you who know me, I have been a long time resident of the chron. My book that has been spoken about on here almost enough times to get my own spot lol is coming out for free to any who have a nook or a Kindle. So if you want a good book its free
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