A few posts early 000s post.

Congrats bowler! May your noughts ever increase..

Okay from the passage, it seems like your wolf cat squadron Sargent there has a concussion, crawled out of medical and returned to the front line. So maybe a head bandage that tagged him as needing care to the wandering medic?

The weakness also seems like a pneumonia has set in. Spore based transfer of biological weapons?

Anyways lovely piece.

Was just pointing them out mate. The only thing that grated for me was the use of tual tucs name over and over. The other stuff is style and your choice

jastius said:

May your noughts ever increase.

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We should have this as a greeting on here, all Spock like. A tag is a wonderfully simple idea, and I like simple!

Thank you for coming back to me Barrett, appreciated.