This is a chunk of a collaboration I'm working on (sporadically) with a Writing God, the amazing @HareBrain.
It's not the first chapter; it comes a little way in, so a teeny bit of background:
Lyla has been sent to kill the Breaker, a boy who is able to open a gateway to Hell and let all the nasty things flood out and consume the world. She's almost on her own (her grandmother -- who brought her up -- is unconscious, trapped in the hell the boy is (possibly) threatening to unleash on the world). Mr Daniels is a member of The Free -- a group of good guys who want to stop hell being opened, and who are all the support Lyla has left.
She's had a tough few chapters, and killing people isn't straightforward for her. Her initial plan was to stab him.
[she's in a small village with a road running between her and the house that the Breaker is in -- that's all been established in the previous chapter, which I didn't write...]
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She watched from the ditch across the road, the spiky crop prickling the back of her thighs. Lights came on in the front room, and Lyla dipped her head to the length of the long grass along the embankment in case anyone looked out. When the boy spun round to the window, she was curious enough to edge closer, to try to make out the features of the Breaker's face.
It wasn't easy, though, to see past the net curtains, across the road; not until he came out of the house, almost at a run, and stood in the small garden, gasping air. Then he was moving, hurrying along the road with huge, fast strides. Lyla stayed in the ditch on the field side and followed.
He was taller than she'd expected, wide across the shoulders, muscle cording down the length of his arms. She instantly reassessed the likelihood of getting a knife into him while he was watching. He could probably hold her off with one hand while she flailed like a cartoon character.
She'd need to be smart. He paused, glanced back, and pushed his brown hair away from his brow, looking so normal it made the anger rise inside her. How dare he be here, strolling along beside the golden corn while her grandmother was trapped in his hell. Her fingers twitched with the need to hurt. With his death, they'd be safe again, and Lyla wouldn't need to be a soldier any more. Her hand found the gun in her pocket. One shot. She could do it from here, even in the dodgy light. One shot in the back of the head and everything would be normal again.
She screwed on the silencer; didn't want anyone calling the police before she was long gone. Waited, waited for a car to pass so the noise would vanish in the engine's roar. Sighted.
He kept walking, unaware, marching down the road to Edinburgh. The pull of fate came over her, the tingling in her hands that spoke to her of something right. Now. Now was the time. It was as if the Free surrounded her, buoyed her up and directed her aim.
The car growled closer, her focus narrowed. One shot.
She inhaled, held her breath. And --
-- he turned, backing off the road to let the car pass him. She saw in an explosion of clarity that his eyes were mismatched -- one brown, the other green. Between the eyes. Come on, Lyla. She didn't know if the voice was her or Mr Daniels, or something else living in her head. Her finger tightened. One shot, between his oddly mismatched eyes. That way the bullet would go straight through the frontal lobe, tear through the parietal lobe, and out the back of his head. He'd get blood, she thought foolishly, in his hair.
The car had passed. The roar faded into the distance. Lyla was still poised, finger on trigger, ready to shoot. But she hadn't.
She lowered the gun, watched him hurry onward towards the lights. What the hell was wrong with her?
It's not the first chapter; it comes a little way in, so a teeny bit of background:
Lyla has been sent to kill the Breaker, a boy who is able to open a gateway to Hell and let all the nasty things flood out and consume the world. She's almost on her own (her grandmother -- who brought her up -- is unconscious, trapped in the hell the boy is (possibly) threatening to unleash on the world). Mr Daniels is a member of The Free -- a group of good guys who want to stop hell being opened, and who are all the support Lyla has left.
She's had a tough few chapters, and killing people isn't straightforward for her. Her initial plan was to stab him.
[she's in a small village with a road running between her and the house that the Breaker is in -- that's all been established in the previous chapter, which I didn't write...]
#
She watched from the ditch across the road, the spiky crop prickling the back of her thighs. Lights came on in the front room, and Lyla dipped her head to the length of the long grass along the embankment in case anyone looked out. When the boy spun round to the window, she was curious enough to edge closer, to try to make out the features of the Breaker's face.
It wasn't easy, though, to see past the net curtains, across the road; not until he came out of the house, almost at a run, and stood in the small garden, gasping air. Then he was moving, hurrying along the road with huge, fast strides. Lyla stayed in the ditch on the field side and followed.
He was taller than she'd expected, wide across the shoulders, muscle cording down the length of his arms. She instantly reassessed the likelihood of getting a knife into him while he was watching. He could probably hold her off with one hand while she flailed like a cartoon character.
She'd need to be smart. He paused, glanced back, and pushed his brown hair away from his brow, looking so normal it made the anger rise inside her. How dare he be here, strolling along beside the golden corn while her grandmother was trapped in his hell. Her fingers twitched with the need to hurt. With his death, they'd be safe again, and Lyla wouldn't need to be a soldier any more. Her hand found the gun in her pocket. One shot. She could do it from here, even in the dodgy light. One shot in the back of the head and everything would be normal again.
She screwed on the silencer; didn't want anyone calling the police before she was long gone. Waited, waited for a car to pass so the noise would vanish in the engine's roar. Sighted.
He kept walking, unaware, marching down the road to Edinburgh. The pull of fate came over her, the tingling in her hands that spoke to her of something right. Now. Now was the time. It was as if the Free surrounded her, buoyed her up and directed her aim.
The car growled closer, her focus narrowed. One shot.
She inhaled, held her breath. And --
-- he turned, backing off the road to let the car pass him. She saw in an explosion of clarity that his eyes were mismatched -- one brown, the other green. Between the eyes. Come on, Lyla. She didn't know if the voice was her or Mr Daniels, or something else living in her head. Her finger tightened. One shot, between his oddly mismatched eyes. That way the bullet would go straight through the frontal lobe, tear through the parietal lobe, and out the back of his head. He'd get blood, she thought foolishly, in his hair.
The car had passed. The roar faded into the distance. Lyla was still poised, finger on trigger, ready to shoot. But she hadn't.
She lowered the gun, watched him hurry onward towards the lights. What the hell was wrong with her?
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